Friday, February 12, 2010
Today when we were writing we were looking at making our sentences really interesting by expanding our sentences by adding interesting words and phrases.
I shared this web site above where Joe makes a simple thing like making tea really interesting. Give it a try yourself and see how you go.
Here are a couple of examples that children thought of...
I kept yawning and getting the chords wrong so I decided I need to go back to bed.
I stumbled to the kitchen, rubbing the sleep out of my eyes, I could make out the toaster.
Soon he was crunching away like someone popping bubbles.
I go outside into the freezing black night to get the smelly dog biscuits.
Posted by Moturoa at Friday, February 12, 2010