Today when we were writing we were looking at making our sentences really interesting by expanding our sentences by adding interesting words and phrases.
I shared this web site above where Joe makes a simple thing like making tea really interesting. Give it a try yourself and see how you go.
Here are a couple of examples that children thought of...
I kept yawning and getting the chords wrong so I decided I need to go back to bed.
I stumbled to the kitchen, rubbing the sleep out of my eyes, I could make out the toaster.
Soon he was crunching away like someone popping bubbles.
I go outside into the freezing black night to get the smelly dog biscuits.
It gos on for a very long tine I wonder whats the logest it can go up to is By Daniel
ReplyDeleteWell done Daniel. It is great that you decided to comment on more than one blog post. I am sure people will enjoy reading your comments.
ReplyDeleteAllanah
hello Moturoa we hasve just looked around your blog and found loads of interesting thing keep up the good work
ReplyDeleterichard and sam
Hi Richard and Sam
ReplyDeleteWell done for leaving a comment on the blog.
Do come back often to see what we have been learning about in class and to see what we have been up to.
Allanah
that is very cool from zoe g
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